Group Screenplay

We have gathered together and wrote a script listening to each other's ideas and critiques. When we couldn't agree on particular scenes we gave each other advantages and disadvantages of the scene. This way we've worked out the best solutions and written our script.

Group Screenplay - redRobe

ANT - Enter with a side view shot of the road. Axl enters right and zooms past the camera, making it shake as he drives past. Cut to 3/4 perspective of the front of Axl on his bike. The camera pans up to his face and then zooms in to show the fine detail (hold this shot for two or three seconds) *Also start playing the song - Gualagara's The White Condor* http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=L1knkis2H2U. Then cut to low perspective shot of the road, Axl enters right again as we watch him drive into the distance.

OZI - Aerial view of the road Axl is driving down, showing all of the sharp turns and twists that he just manages to drive round. Cut to a front view shot of Axl as he looks down at his monitor. Show whole monitor with the timer “00.09.59” flashing red. Cut to a shot of Axl’s face as he frowns (anger, worried, you choose). Cut to Axl’s right hand as he forces down the accelarator. Side view of the bike as it accelerates off screen. Then ground perspective shot of Axl as he drives towards the camera, then as he drives past, have the camera follow him round to see him drive off into the distance. Quick aerial shot of Axl as he drives off the main road onto a faded road.

KAMIL -Landscape shot of the village “Vajrayana” as Axl drives towards it. Cut to a shot of Axl’s face as he is in deep thought, here have the music quiet down to a background echo with the background going into slow motion. Cut to a front view of a church (everything is quiet). Then the doors open and we hear people coming out of the church cheering and being happy. Just as everyone steps down onto the ground Axl enters the shot from the right (cut to a new shot when Axl is in the middle of the screen). Front view of Axl on his bike which is inches away from the bride and groom (just narrowly missing them).

SEAN - Cut to a shot of the bouquet flying through the air. Then cut to a back shot, showing Axl driving off into the distance, with the wedding guests to the right of the screen looking shocked and angry. Cut to a perspective shot of Axl again, as he’s driving along a shadow covers the road and him. Cut to his glasses/helmet visor and show a reflection of the city and cruiser appear. Then cut to another landscape shot, showing the city rising up above the horizon as Axl drives towards it.